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amateur erotic fantasy poorly written cliches”In this pathetic attempt at erotic fantasy, LoveSkySan69 struggles to weave even the most basic of narratives around his sex scenes. ‘The Spellbook’ is a joke, a lazy excuse for him to string together a bunch of half-baked, uninspired ideas and call it a story. You’ll groan at the stilted dialogue, roll your eyes at the cliches, and wonder how this hack managed to convince himself that this drivel is anything more than a waste of time.”Tags: erotic fantasy, bad writing, cliches, stilted dialogue, LoveSkySan69, The Spellbook
Date: January 9, 2025
